Physical
and social environments and personal relationships are huge contributors to a
characters being. Billy Collins demonstrates this throughout his poem Taking
Off Emily Dickson’s Clothes. “ You will want to know that she was standing by an open window in an
upstairs bedroom, motionless, a little wide-eyed.” The use of the commas turn
the statement into a more personal
relationship instead of it being just simply physical. It creates short breaks
that allows the readers to dive into the moment and be a part of the personal
and emotional bond. Standing by the open window is her environment and standing
“motionless, a little wide eyed” is more of a personal relationship with her
emotions. Comparing this to his poem Night Sand, the short length of them poem
is what encourages the reader to be a part of this personal and emotional bond.
“and tail from the heavy, rhythmic blows.” The comma between “heavy, rhythmic”
creates a dramatic pause, that gives the reader that opportunity to intensify
that emotional bond.
Additionally
Collins continues by saying “The complexity of women’s undergarments in
nineteenth-century America is not to be waved off.” From this quote we know
that her environment is nineteenth-century America, a time when women weren’t
viewed as much more than sexual objects. In my opinion this means that the
relationship between the two becomes sexual, this is because he’s talking about
her ”undergarments”. However when the poet continues by saying “is not to be
waved off.” is almost a contradiction to what the reader first had in mind. The
relationship almost becomes respectful; in my opinion she’s being praised for
being a woman. Moreover in his poem Night Sands Collins says “I will move off
like the slow armadillo over night sand.” This contrasts to the bond he creates
in Taking Off Emily Dickson’s Clothes, because now instead of a bond being
created, he's detaching himself from one that once existed. This adds on to the
personal relationship in a sense of loss.
Furthermore
Billy Collins continues by saying “I proceeded like a polar explorer.” The
simile emphasizes on the many layers, which could be interpreted as the layers
on her body, for example her garments and robes or her emotional layers. As the
reader you begin to feel an emotional attachment due to the warm welcome into
this intimate atmosphere. According to Grace Mwizero “Environment, whether physical or
social, is an umbrella term for the combination of external physical conditions
and the complex of social and cultural conditions affecting the nature an
individual. Personal relationships refer to close connections between people,
formed by emotional bonds and interactions.” This quote strongly relates to the
poem Taking Off Emily Dickson’s clothes because the reader is only invited to a
personal atmosphere when he’s alone with her. However the environment does
affect the nature of the individual, foe example the environment being 19th
Century America affects Billy Collin’s way of looking at her. She’s more of a
sexual figure.
To conclude
I believe that characters in works of literature are at their most vivd when
formed by physical and social environment as much as by personal relationships.
Billy Collins shows this throughout both is poems Taking off Emily Dickson’s
Clothes and Night Sands.
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