'Poets are just people who
have read poetry and been moved by that poetry to emulation. Poetry is inspired
by reading poetry,' by Billy Collins.
Afternoon with Irish cows
is a poem about cows, how cows would be 'anchored there on all fours,' or how
cows seem 'patient and dumbfounded.' But is it just about cows? On this post I
will be discussing on the profound meaning of this plain but as you'll see unique
poem.
The poem's structure is seven
lines per stanza and there are five stanzas. Billy Collin's rhythm varies from
line to line, but all first lines of every stanza have a corresponding sequence
of beats. All first lines have more than ten beats compared to the following
lines in each stanza. You also get the tone of the poem from the structure and
use of the letter 'I.' For example in stanza three line 2,' would let out a
sound so phenomenal, that I would put down the paper.' Where you would normally
expect 'I' to start the following line Collins however en jambs it and starts
with 'that.' This has been continuously done through the poem, in stanza one
line four- five, also in the last line of stanza four and the first line of
stanza five. By doing so it makes it hard for the reader to fluently read the
poem, you see the attempt from Collin's to slow the reader. Furthermore
Collin's slows the reader down through the description of the cows, one would
just say ' the cow went moo.' Billy Collins however uniquely slows the reader
down by saying,' bellowing head laboring upward as she gave voice to the rising
full-bodied cry ....announcing the large unadultared cowness of herself.'(stanza
four and five) Billy Collins is already establishing why he is a distinguished
poet laureate in just the structure of this poem.
My first reading of an
'Afternoon with Irish cows,' seemed as a plaintive poem that's talking about
nothing more than cows. But after a number of readings I saw a connection
between 'Afternoon with Irish cows,' and my school. Well first since it's
talking about cows -Irish cows, I decided to find out what's so unique about
Irish cows. In my endeavor to find out what makes the Irish cow so unique I ran
across the Irish moiled cow(which I believe Billy Collins refers to.) The cows
are only set apart from fellow cows with how physically similar they look, they
all have the same black and white color.
So
why did I liken Irish cows to my fellow students? I thought of how interested
Billy Collin's observed the cows and then decided to overlook lines that
directly pointed to Irish cows. What I was left with is the image of a teacher
standing by the window most likely during a lunch break and just being utterly
amazed by how 'mysterious, how patient and dumbfounded they long appear in the
quiet afternoon.' Students just like cows (seems a bit wrong to say) all look
the same, in my school they all dressed in their white tops and navy blue bottoms. Am sure if you ask a teacher they would
sometimes tell you that once in a while they have ' put down the paper or the
knife they were cutting an apple with and walked across' to see why a student
made such a cry, as if they were 'being torched or pierced through the side
with a long spear.' The teachers would confirm that 'it sounded like pain until
they could see the noisy one...that she was only announcing the large unadulterated
cowness of herself.' To add on, sometimes the teachers are surprised that they
'would pass a window and look out to see the field suddenly empty as if
they(the students) had taken wing, flown off to another country.' This is my
view that came to me when reading an 'afternoon with Irish cows' as I watched
my fellow students play/socialize outside. Conclusively, I am sincerely sorry
to comparing my fellow students to cows but then if this will make matters any
better I too will be a cow.
Heh he..THANK YOU Abdulkarim! I like your original interpretation! You have also written in detail about the structure of the poem. It seems you have spent much time pondering and 'chewing the cud' over this. I enjoyed reading this. Best Mrs D
ReplyDeleteI like your interpretation of how braeburn students are similar to billy collins' description of the irish cows, because to be honest its pretty true
ReplyDeleteNice essay
Made me laugh!! I have to agree with Daniel Doria, it is kind of true. Great analysis of the poem by the way, great detail. Wizilya L
ReplyDeleteI beg to differ. I am not a cow. :P Lovely essay I never thought about it like that! Honestly while i was reading it the whole time all I was thinking was - REALLY WHAT IS THIS ABOUT?
ReplyDeletePlease explain how I can explore the way collins creates such vivid impression of the cows
ReplyDeleteShows deep insight . . .
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