Just in case you didn’t know, a
Bonsai is an ornamental tree or shrub grown in a pot and artificially prevented
from reaching its normal size. While writing his poem “Bonsai,” Billy Collins
had obviously been staring intently across the room he was in at his own
miniature tree. The first thing he says, is how only one Bonsai can “Throw a
room completely out of whack.” It’s so small, so it makes everything around it
look gigantic; oversized. He makes it seem as if it has its own world, as he
does in many other of his poems. “A lone stark gesture of wood on the distant
cliff of a table.” He then goes on to explain that when looked at up close, the
Bonsai draws everything down to its size; “The box of matches is a raft, and
the coffee cup a cistern..” Billy Collins obviously let his imagination run
wild with this poem, describing his own little world by looking at a simple
Bonsai tree. He explains how he wants to climb up into its tiny branches and
look down and see a “tiny whale.. Plunging forward through the troughs.” To
make the poet see everything pulled down to proportion with the Bonsai tree,
Collins ingeniously makes every stanza only two lines long, nice and neat; just
like a Bonsai Tree.
Thanks Daniel. I think this appraisal is a little too short...perhaps reflecting the miniature size of the bonsai? I would have commented on the structure - the neatness and brevity of the lines and the charming imagery. . . Perhaps hold a magnifying glass over the punctuation and the effect of this. Also it helps to compare the poem to some of Collins' other poems...it allows for a deeper reflection. What do other people say about the poem? Hopefully next time, you will contribute with a little more passion! But thanks very much for your first contribution! I look forward to reading more! Best,. Mrs D
ReplyDeleteHey Bilbo! ;) I really liked your comment on the neatness of the poem and the length of the stanzas. Keep it up bruv
ReplyDeletehey..i like the way you used a simple and straight process to explore the poem, just like Billy..Perhaps a deeper analysis of the meaning would help me out- Grace
ReplyDeleteNow I want a bonsai, do they like die if you don't water them since they genetically altered? I hope not...
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