BAR TIME by Billy Collins.
Billy Collins explores how people spend too much time in bars enjoying themselves leaving or trying to forget their troubled lives behind even if it’s only for 15 minutes. But then eventually time catches to them this is seen in the last stanza it says “when ordinary time slouches past in a topcoat rain running off the brim of his hat.” Billy Collins uses symbolism to show how one begins to wonder if they have some kind of choice other than running after time or taking life easily in a while thinking that they can outline their troubles.
The poem is
under the category of humor I personally think it’s funny and ironic because it’s
mocking the society on how they set and use their time and also how to avoid
their problems.
The poem is
structured into four stanzas, it has long sentences which make it fluid and it
is almost as if he is having a conversation with himself because it’s in first
person and he is making direct sentence.
The tone of the poem is monotonous because it doesn’t change and it is a
free verse poem since it has no rhyme.
I personally
think the “bar” is just a setting that Billy Collins used but his main message to
the readers is that the poem can make one feel aware of those moments when you
are able to step outside time. This can be verified through the quote “this makes us a rather advanced group doing our drinking
in the unknown future”. It
portrays how people are able to step outside time and observe themselves and other people rushing
around doing things that we all probably think or thought are so dynamic and necessary.
I think the poem also signifies self-expression through the idea of being
hyper-aware of simple moments. I really love the poem because it conveys how
simply capitalizing ordinary time turns into this person we can see instead of
just getting an idea. For instance in the last stanza when it says, “no wonder such thoughtless pleasure derives from tending the
small fire of a cigarette, from observing this glass of whiskey and ice, the
cold rust I am sipping”. It is an imagery that made me imagine
people drink and smoke in a bar and watching the rest of the world scrubbing their
cars across the streets thinking they look “like
they have never had a day of fun in their whole life.” I can
say that the poem is compact and clever and does make one really think about
life in general.
By REGINA CHIPANDA.
Thanks Regina. Don't forget that Collins is focusing here on the fact that at the bar the clock has been put 15 minutes ahead. It is from this manipulation of time that he derives his humour...For example, "This makes us a rather advanced group" the humour centered very much around the word "advanced". Also "doing our drinking in the unknown future" lends a funny sort sci fi feel to this strange little observation. While he sits inside the bar, in the future so to speak, it gives the poet an odd sort of power to silently watch "Ordinary Time" (note the personification here) slouching "past in a top coat" in the rain. I feel that you cannot write about this poem without noting this! The manipulation of time....Mrs D
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