Walking across the Atlantic by Billy Collins.
Billy Collins shows his attachment with nature as his
collection of poems share that same theme. For example, ‘Walking across the Atlantic’ and ‘Driving Animals’ have the common lines “tonight I will sleep on its
rocking surface” and “… rock to sleep in the bow and lift of antlers.” The poet
metaphorically tries to show how he compares the soft waves with a baby being
rocked to sleep.
Focusing on the poem walking
across the Atlantic Ocean, Collins tries to set your mind on nature and internal
conflict. The poem simply talks about a man who isolates himself by crossing
the Atlantic. The reader might see this as a double entente in which the man
has issues within himself as well as issues with the pollution of nature around
him. The first stanza says, “I wait for the holiday crowd to clear the beach
before stepping onto the first wave.” The words “holiday crowd” represents
nature, which is dirty and polluted as mankind is constantly destroying it. The
author mentions the ocean, which is where most water pollution occurs. They
could as well stand for the isolation the poet wants to have in order to settle
down and reflect on his inner issues.
The poet continues to explain the man’s journey as he says,
“…checking for whales, waterspouts.” The whales represent emotional healing and
rebirth as he struggles to connect with his emotion vulnerability and power. When
the poet says,”…I feel the water holding up my shifting weight. Tonight I will
sleep on its rocking surface.” The phrase “holding up my shifting weight” suggests
that his feelings, troubles, problems, and issues are being lifted off his
shoulders. In this case “shifting weight” shows how as the oceans waves move,
so does the density of all his worries. In the quote “…tonight I will sleep on
its rocking surface,” Collins brings an image of a baby to mind, that is being
rocked to sleep safely. Hence the man has reached his safe haven.
When the poet sums up the poem by saying, “but for now I try
to imagine what this must look like to the fish below the bottoms of my feet
appearing, disappearing,” he brings back the theme of nature in which “footsteps”
are a symbol of humans on earth leaving their mark after they have destroyed the
earth. The poem is a metaphor of which the free verse and structure of the poem
makes you picture the flowing of waves in an ocean through the writer’s strong
technique of Imagery.
By Ella Richard.
There is a real poignancy to this poem. Oceans and whales make man seem so tiny and irrelevant. I like the idea of a little man making his weary away across the sea of emotions, dreams and subconsciousness with all the little fish of this realm looking up and wondering what his steps are. We are reminded, in a funny sort of way, of the original water walker and we all know he didn't REALLY walk on it...an optical illusion or a metaphor at any rate.
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